- to establish that she has a date afterwards but she's hungry - food is not ready/no food but she is fighting against time to meet up with her friend - Resolution at the end
Right now the ending is not clear and the drama in the whole piece is very week due to the above reasons.
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電影感好強。。。
謝謝，我老是想知道，形容甚麼是電影感。
不過，計劃不足，分鏡分得不好。
lack of the followings:
- to establish that she has a date afterwards but she's hungry
- food is not ready/no food but she is fighting against time to meet up with her friend
- Resolution at the end
Right now the ending is not clear and the drama in the whole piece is very week due to the above reasons.
Please RE-DO it!!!!
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